User talk:Asf45/Benchmark I: Introduction

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Student Comments

This is a fantastic introduction. I really learnt a lot from this introduction.--Dominic Chen (talk) 00:47, 3 April 2017 (EDT)

Overall I thought this introduction did a good job of describing MMBD and the model you are reproducing. The only thing I felt confused about after reading was what paracrine meant. I think it would be worth explaining what paracrine interactions are since they are such a key component of your study. --Michael Hasson (talk) 01:25, 4 April 2017 (EDT)

Instructor Comments

  • Benchmark submitted on time?
    • Yes
  • Rubric submitted on time?
    • Yes
  • Significance of problem?
    • Yes
  • Statement of hypothesis?
    • Yes - excellent, clear
  • List of references?
    • Yes
  • Properly formatted references?
    • Yes

On the whole, this is an excellent draft of the Introduction. It is well written, clear, and provides the reader the background needed to really understand your project. Keep up the good work!

--Hillel Chiel (talk) 08:45, 30 March 2017 (EDT)