User talk:Awm46/Benchmark IV: Discussion

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Student Comments

Instructor Comments

  • Benchmark submitted on time?
    • Yes
  • Rubric submitted on time?
    • Yes
  • How well does the model support the original hypothesis?
    • Discussed.
  • Support for hypothesis and assumptions from other data in the literature?
    • Discussed.
  • Limitations of results?
    • Discussed.
  • Discrepancies and how they affect conclusions?
    • Discussed.
  • Relationship to other work in the field?
    • Discussed.
  • Discussion of future work
    • Discussed.

On the whole, this is a very good first draft of the Discussion section. Several factors keep it from being an excellent draft. There are many typos and other errors in sentences; please read carefully to fix these. Some of the language is either unclear or too informal; please improve this. Organization of some of the paragraphs could be clearer. If these concerns are addressed, this is likely to be an excellent Discussion section. Keep up the good work!

--Hillel Chiel (talk) 17:22, 27 April 2017 (EDT)